Honest opinion, what do you think of these lyrics I wrote?

It's pretty good if that's your taste in music. It's a bit simple for me though, too straightforward for my liking. I like trying to figure out what the song's about and these lyrics are pretty much just laid out. But you're good for being 16. I'm 16 and I like listening to music but I don't think I can ever write out a whole song like you just did.